In January the 6th grade class wrote a tall tale as an assignment for the end of the story Maniac Magee.  Maniac is a larger than life character and the class had to write a story with a similar character.  They enjoying writing and you can tell they had fun with their imaginations!
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Mrs. Torrey, English 6

Footsteps
By Alyssan Clarke

          People used to think she was a weirdo and they always thought she was not going to be able to follow her dreams. The girl in this story has a name nobody will forget. Her name is Lilly Jackson and she grew up on a small ranch outside of town. Her family owned lots of dogs, but dogs aren’t the only thing she likes. She also liked the wilderness. Her lifetime dream was to live in the wild with the animals. Her parents thought she was crazy and she would just grow out of it but she didn’t. The only thing that kept her parents from sending her to an aid class is, when she was five she would found a wild coyote and started to play with it at first her parents thought it was one of their dogs but they soon found out it wasn’t.

          When Lilly graduated High School she went to school to be a biologist. She was top of the class. When she graduated college she took a job as a wild life expert in a town outside of a city. She had that job for a long time and she loved it. Then it happened the most extraordinary thing.      She was in her way to work when she saw a coyote run on front of her car she STOPPED!!! She looked and saw that that coyote looked like the coyote I played with when I was five!!  She thought they all probably look the same. That’s when all of a sudden her car slides right off the road and into the WOODS!!! Her car crashes into a tree and she turns out ok. So she gets out of the car and she looks to see where she is and sees that she is not far from the town. Then she thought to herself, “I can just walk back to town and get my car pulled out.” Then all of the sudden she sees it the coyote in front of her it stands up and howls as loud as a fire truck siren. Then all of a sudden it runs deep into the woods. She thought “that was weird.” Then she thought “this is it my chance to get into the wild!”

          She took off without looking back. She headed straight after the coyote. It leads her straight into the woods. She all of a sudden felt like she was following the coyote’s exact footsteps. Suddenly the coyote stopped and all of a sudden different kinds of animals ran towards the coyote. She didn’t know what was going on. She thought this wasn’t possible. She looked at the animals and she thought it looked as if they were talking to each other. Then all of a sudden the coyote snapped back towards Lilly. Then he looked like he was going to bite her and then he started barking at her. She thought that if she was going to stay out here for along time she would want to get to know the animals. So she acted all nice and soon became friends with all the wild animals.

          When she woke up she heard someone talking. She thought I it must be someone looking for her. So she got up and she walked around her camp and saw nobody. She listened harder and it turned out to be the animals talking!! She then ran into the woods and she thought she was running really fast then she realized SHE WAS!!! She then could smell food from the diner a couple miles away in town! Then she could hear the cars from the town! She went back to camp and lived there for a few more years. One morning when she woke up she saw that the animals weren’t there so she went looking for them. She soon found people out in the woods that were carrying crates. She looked to see what was in the crates and it was the animals! She ran to take a closer look and it turns out the people are from another country here to steal animals for their fur!! She then howled like a coyote and all the hunters looked her way. While the hunters were looking for what they thought was a coyote she snuck around so that she was looking at the backs of the hunters and she went up to the cages and opened them. While the hunters were still looking the other way she and the animals ran as fast as they could back to their camp. The good thing was that they were all back together again. They lived happily ever after for ever.

 

Too Fast
by Mackenzie

          One day there was a girl named Cynthia Finkle. Cynthia Finkle was not an ordinary eight year old, she had a special talent. Her special talent was that she could talk fifty words per second. Except she also had a problem, no one could understand her. The only person that could understand Cynthia was her best friend Caroline Pillownowski.

          It was Monday September eighth, the first day of school. Cynthia and Caroline always walk to the bus stop together. Once they got to school, they hung their backpacks in their lockers and went to room 368. Their teacher, Mrs. Ellen said “good morning class.” Then the class said “good morning Mrs. Ellen” Everyone said it except she noticed that somebody said it very fast, but she didn’t really care at that moment. At nine’ o’clock it was time for reading, so Mrs. Ellen called on Cynthia. Cynthia started to read, but when the teacher heard her reading she immediately stopped her because she was reading to fast. So the teacher said, “Cynthia can you come over her really fast?” so Cynthia went over to Mrs. Ellen. Mrs. Ellen said “I think I am going to put you I speech therapy.”

                   When Cynthia got home she did not want to talk to her parents about school. She went up stairs and did her homework. When she was done with her homework she called Caroline to talk to her about the Speech Therapy. Caroline said, “Well maybe we should go to my Uncle Melvin’s house. Meet me at the Library by the Park.”

          Once they arrived at Carlines Uncle Melvin’s house Caroline knocked on the door, but there was no answer. The girls looked at each other. When they looked back to the front they realized that they were falling through a dark hole! After a couple of seconds they hit a lumpy mattress. They wondered around the house and looked at all the inventions. After ten minutes of walking around Uncle Melvin popped up from behind an invention and scared Cynthia and Caroline because he had tidied hair a big goggles on! Uncle Melvin said, “hello Caroline, what brings you her for?” Caroline said, “ well my best friend Cynthia, talks very fast and we were wondering if you could help?” “well I just made a new invention and it slows sown people.” Said Uncle Melvin. “Well let’s give it a try.” Said Caroline.

          When Cynthia came out of the invention Caroline said, “well say something Cynthia.” Cynthia did and she sounded great. Both Caroline and Cynthia gave Uncle Melvin a hug and went back to their houses. When Cynthia got home her parents couldn’t believe how great she sounded, they were shocked. The next morning at school Mrs. Ellen said, “Are you ready for speech therapy Cynthia?” Cynthia said “okay but I don’t think I need it any more.” “wow your voice sounds great, I guess you don’t need to go any more.” That is the story of Cynthia Finckle.

 

Captain Whitey-Tighty
by Jon Acton

Once upon a time there was a superhero and his sidekick named Captain Whitey-Tighty and Undiman. They were best friends even though Captain Whitey-Tighty is a lot older. Captain Whitey-Tighty is 30 years old and Undiman is 12. They live in Toilet Town. See Undiman is still in school so he can’t help Captain Whitey-Tighty that much. When he can he kicks butt. They have to disguise themselves when they aren’t in action. Undiman’s real name is Tiki and Captain Whitey-Tighty’s is Tom. They fight crime a lot. There was this one time were these aliens came and disguised themselves as the school nurses. Man good times good times.

            There layer was at “Tom’s” house. It was his basement. Until one day. Arch-Rival Dr. Stanky Diper Pants came to town. He came into the layer and stole every little speck of anything that was there. They had to get it back. So Captain Whitey-Tighty called Undiman and told him everything and said,” you have to help me.” So the next day Undiman and Captain Whitey-Tighty went to Dr. Stanky Diper Pants’ layer and saw him looking at all the papers. There was a white board and it said “Plan: Take OVER TOILET TOWN!!!!” They were devastated!!!!!

          So they had to make a plan to stop him! They knew that he could shoot dipers over a mile away and hit dead center on a target. So that was a problem. So they decided to burn all the dipers!?!?!?! So over night they broke into the house and stole all the dipers!?! Then that morning they woke up and burnt them all to ash! Dr. Stanky Diper Pants woke up because of the smell. When he went to go put his diper on , they were all gone!?! Then he figured out what the smell was it was the dipers!! He got super mad!?!?!

          So the next day he went over there and threatened the whole world! So they promised with there fingers crossed that they wouldn’t do anything else. So the next day “Tiki” goes to school and “Tom” went to work. Then the next day they did the same and so on and so forth. They did that for about two weeks. Then on Sunday they did something no one would expect.

          They called the H.B.I, the S.W.I.T, and the popos! They went to the house. Surrounded it! Then they did something very weird! They called the helicopters to come pick it up! They did and then they took him to jail and put the house in the dump.

                                      THE END!   

     

 

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The Fishing story
By Hunter Morley

Once upon a time there was a man called Jon. Everybody  knew him for catching the biggest fish ever in Portage lake. People say it was 100 feet long salmon but we all know it was a 50 inch salmon. He was the top person or top of the food chain. He had the ability to see fish under the water. And the big ones too.      

But one day a strong and muscular man named Hunter came into town. He had it all fish grafts, the newest rods, and tackle. And he was trying to catch the biggest fish ever caught on Portage lake. He came from a little town called Cadillac.

When he got on the lake he immediately started catching fish. After a while he got his limit and went in for dinner. He ate the salmon that he got and went to sleep. When he woke up he had a cup of coffee. Then he ate breakfast and went fishing.

  He got a bite on his pole and set it. It was a monster it fought for an hour and then he got it and it was Portage lakes biggest fish. When Jon found out about it he went out and usted his under water vision and the fish came. He saw the big one and it was another Portage lake record. It stayed that way forever.

Hunter found out and he went back to his normal life in Cadillac. But he will be back looking to brake the record. But Jon knew he would have the record forever.

The girl who gets lost
Rhianan

One day there was a girl named Victoria. She let her dogs out and three hours later, she called for them but they wouldn’t come. So she went outside to look for them. After a wile she couldn’t find them, and then she looked around and there was no familiar surroundings. That’s when she new she was lost. She started to build houses with her strong muscles that people say could lift 200,000 pounds. The first night she was there the deer would come up to her but she was really freaked out! The next day she continued to try and find her dogs but she forgot about her super sense of seeing. So she started to look like she had her super vision.

          The she noticed that there were a whole bunch of animals following her. She started to get freaked out. When she got to another place were she wanted to sleep she made another house with her strong muscles. When she was done the animals were trying to tell her that they wanted a shelter too. For some reason she could understand them. So she made them a shelter and all the wild animals were sleeping inside it. The next day she started to talk to all the animals and using her fast legs to run with the animals.

          One day when she was talking to a squirrel the squirrel said, “I no were your dogs are.” Victoria was so happy! So the next day they were on there way to got the dogs. She used her duper senses to get a wild horse to be friends with her. When they became friends she rode the horse, they finally got to the dogs they were really hungry and thirsty and hungry. She got on the horse and picked up the dogs and deer lead them back to there hide out. She was so happy, she was talking to her dogs and she was feeding them and gave them water. Victoria was so happy they were back. The next day they started there trip back home. They ate berries and drank water from the stream. When she got home she played with her dogs and gave them baths she also feed them there dog food and gave them fresh water.  When she was done she went outside and with her super strength she made a big cage for her dogs so they would never run away again.

 She also built a big barn and kept the horse. Victoria also adapted the other wild life and with her super strength made a very big cage for all of them. Today she likes to use her fast legs to keep up with her wild animals. Victoria also likes to talk to her animals. She still builds shelters for wild animals with her super powers.

          Victoria adopted more animals and she has 5 horses. She also has ten deer, five cows, 2 squirrels, four sheep, and three mountain lions. She loves her animals a lot and she is teaching her mountain lion to do tricks. She also loves to ride her horses. Victoria is doing great and now she has a big petting zoo.

Brandin’s Great Adventure
By Brandin Cromwel

“Hey BRANDIN…BRAAANDIN”. “Yeah”? “Want to come out and play?” “Kyler not right now.” “Why? I’m playing Halo”. “Just for a little bit…pleeease”. “Fine”. “YES”! “So later we went and got Caleb”. “Hey Caleb”. “Yeah Brandin”? “Why did you want to come out here in the woods?” “Oh just to get some air and get free!” “Oh ok.” “HEY LOOK!!!” “What, what is it Kyler!?!” “ ITS IT’S A”…

          “IT’S A BEAR RUUUUUN!” A few minutes later. “Huff Puff I think we lost it?” “Yeah the problem is where are we Kyler?” “No problamo I know my way around these woods!” “A Huh sure Caleb then which way did we come from! Ummm this way no that way maybe this way give me a sec.” “Lets get moving we can’t waste in any time.” “What, where to?” “I don’t know somewhere!” “Fine lead the way Brandin.” One hour later. “So where are we?” “Guys its getting late we should try to build a shelter before it gets to dark and cold.” “I will go get some big sticks.” “I’ll go with Kyler, what about you Brandin?” “I…… will go look for water.” “Ok? Sure”. “Meet back here.” “I wonder where Brandin is?” “Dude we just left!” “Oh yeah sorry.” A few hours later. “Kyler…Caleb!”

“What? I’ve found a fire.” “WHAT! Come on I’ll show you!” “Hurry, Hurry its right here.” “Lets go see if anyone is there!” “HELLO!!! Is anyone here.” “Who’s there?” “EEK what was that?” “Celeb be quiet” “Some ones there shh.” “Hello my name’s Brandin could you help me and my friends, we’re lost.” “so are we.” “We’re never going to find our way home thanks to you all wanting to come out into these woods!” “Caleb!” “So what’s your names?” “My names Trever and my buddy here’s name is Keith.” “What’s your name again?” “Brandin and this is Caleb and Kyler” “Nice to meet you Brandin, Caleb, and Kyler.” “Soooo do you think we could work together to get our  way out of here?” “Sure.” The next morning. “Hey, hey Brandin.” “What?” “It’s morning wake up!” “Trever and Keith went looking for food.” “Why don’t you make yourself useful and go find some wood!” “Ha very funny Kyler but, I will take that offer.” “How about you go and get some water.” “Fine.” “Hey Kyler where’s Caleb?” “Sleeping.” “Oh.” “Well, then I’ll get going” “Do da do da do whoa look at that, I should take this tree back to ca… co coyote run Brandin run.” “A few minutes later, Huff puff whew that was a close one.” “Why are you breathing so hard?” “I…I was running from a coyote.” “Oh.” “And you had that humongous tree with you?” “I didn’t notice it, I though I dropped it.” “Boy will everyone be happy.”

A week later. “I think its kind of fun out here don’t you Brandin?” “Yeah for you cause you’ve been out here for a year.” “I would probably be dead if it wasn’t for my older brother Trever!” “So where did you live” “It’s been so long I can’t remember.” “Yeah I’ve been out here for a month.” “BRANDIN.” “CALEB.” “KYLER.” “Who’s that Brandin?” “MY MOM!” “MOM!” “BRANDIN!” “Mom I love you!” “I love you too, I will never ever let you out of my sight again.” Brandin, Caleb, and Kyler went back to there normal lives and Brandin’s parents adopted Keith and Trever. And life was happier than ever after that!

The End!

Plastic Man and the Super Mutant Team
by Caleb Wisniski           

          Caleb Wisniski found out about his powers one day when he was in Gym class. He was playing dodge ball, when Ronald Driver got mad at him and picked a fight. So Caleb hit him and he flew up up up and WAM!!!! He hit the ceiling. Caleb was sent to jail L for breaking every bone in Ronald Drivers body. Ronald was stuck in the ceiling for 2 days!!!!!!

          Three weeks after Caleb was sent to jail Professor Jon Acton showed up to talk to Caleb. Jon said “hmmmmmm Caleb Wisniski, you have been a bad boy,” and he smiled. Caleb replied “who are you and what do you want,”? Jon said “I am Professor Jon Acton and I train superheroes and mutants,” .  “What do you want with me,” he replied. And Jon said “ I have been watching you Caleb and I know something you have only guessed at… you are a superhero Caleb, but I don’t know if you are up to it Caleb,” . but Caleb said “ Try me,”

          Four days after Jon visited, Caleb escaped from prison!!! But not as a villain, he escaped as a hero!!!! He met with Jon and went to super HQ. when they got there Caleb changed his name to Plastic Man!! He also met other mutants like Cowboy Rick, Metal Woman, Laser Beam Brandin, and Kreachure Kyler. But Plastic Mans (no longer Caleb) favorite mutant was Longshot, who could shoot a target from 100 yards away blindfolded.

          About a week later Plastic man learned about some of his other powers like the rockets in his feet, and being able to eat 10,000 lb of food at a time. He started training after he was tested for powers. He only had four powers and they were: super jump, huge plastic muscles as hard as rock, eating 10,000 lb of food, and super punch. Three days after Plastic Man started training the Super Mutant Team got a call, someone robbed the national bank!! They geared up and flew to the bank as fast as possible. When they got there Metal Woman said “SUPER MUTANT TEAM GO”!!!! WAM!! POW!! CRASH!!!! They beat up the robbers, but Mr. Villainious came on a floating device and stole the money and said, “You haven’t seen the last of me Super Mutant Team MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA”!!!!!!! Then he flew away!!!

          When they got back to the lair they noticed that Cowboy Rick was missing!!! They looked for him but that resulted as another disappearance, it was Kreachure Kyler!! This time they looked in a group. But Laser Beam Brandin went missing too!!! The rest of the team stayed together and they heard BOOM BOOM BOOM CRASH!!!! A huge alien robot came and took Metal Woman and Longshot with him! Plastic Man flew after it and found out that Mr. Villainious was going to blow up the MOON!!!! So Plastic Man wooped Mr. Villainious’s butt. He saved his team and a few years later married Metal Woman and had 5 kids.

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