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The Million Dollar Case
Lauren
On
Friday night at seven o’ clock I saw a tall man
in a telephone booth. He looked very suspicious. I
wondered about him all night. The next night I was by an old
dark alley by Main St. I saw the same tall man I did last
night. I over heard them talking, the tall man said to the
other man, you’re the captain what do I do to help? The
captain said, tomorrow we leaving on a trip to
Washington D.C. I hear they got over a million dollars
locked up in there. After I heard that I was scared,
these were bad people I’ve got to be careful. So I walked
home. A few hours past and I went to the county police
station, I told them about the two men and the money they
said that they would look out for them. Five hours past and
I got a call from the police station and the woman said, We
think we found them can you come and see? I said yes. When I
got there I saw them and they were the ones! I was so happy
they caught them. The woman said they would go to court the
next day. The next day I woke up to a phone call and the
woman said they were found guilty. I was happy yet again. I
think some day I will have my own detective agency.
The Awesome Mystery
Mark
On
Friday night at seven o’clock it was raining and
lighting out. There was a tall man waking down the
street. Then the tall man put a brief case down by a
telephone booth and the man waked off. I went outside to
the brief case and opened it up and there was a million
dollars in it. Then I ran to the captain but he
was leafing on a trip. So the captain was not there
then I went home with a million dollars.
The Tall Man On Friday Night
Kassidy
Something
suspicious happened on Friday night at seven o’clock.
I was watching T.V. when suddenly I saw something out of my
window. I got up and looked around. I didn’t see anything.
So I watched T.V. again. There it was again. A tall man
was walking into a telephone both. All of the
sudden I heard a huge noise. I looked out the window I saw a
man shoot on the ground. I called the cops. They said the
man was leaving on a trip and was a captain.
Also they found a million dollars in his pocket and
as soon as they found the killer they would put him in jail.
Friday was very scary.
Freaky Friday
Kyle
I was very
scared one night. That night I was with Jarrod, Bobby,
Austin, and Tighe. On Friday night at seven o’clock
we were going to the Ghost Ship in Manistee. We waited for
Bobby to get there so we found a telephone booth and
called him. Then he showed up at 7:30. After he got there we
went into the Ghost Ship. When we got in we were shocked
because Jarrod was already gone because the captain
grabbed him for a tour around the wheelhouse. As we were
walking a case with a million dollars in it popped
open! So Austin went for the money and a tall man
popped out and said “no money for you”! and slapped Austin,
and then vanished. As soon as e disappeared Jarrod popped
out a hidden door. So ten we got off the Ghost Ship and
Jarrod slipped and fell on his butt! He was okay. Then Bobby
told us that he was leaving on a trip to Mexico for a
week. It was 9:30 so everybody left and Tighe was scared all
night long. This Friday was very freaky!!
The Great Mystery
Kelly
On
Friday night at seven o’clock I saw a tall man
with a tan trench coat, a black top hat, and a brief case. I
saw him on my way to the movies with some friends. While we
were on our way he stopped at a restaurant called Captain’s
Café. On the specials sign I saw the captain’s
supreme. On our way back from the movies at about nine
o’clock we saw the man paying for his meal and in his brief
case was a MILLION DOLLARS! Then we hid behind a
dumpster and saw him walking into Penn Station. We were
guessing he was leaving on a trip. The next morning
my mom was reading the paper and I saw on the cover
suspicious man murders train master. The cops found the
train master in his chair with a knife in his throat. I
called my friend Jenny from a telephone booth since
we don’t have a house phone yet. Her mom answered so I asked
if Jenny was there and her mom said hold on a minute. When
Jenny answered I asked her if she read what happened in the
paper. After that she said the man hasn’t been caught yet.
Then I walked back to my house and had some breakfast. A few
hours later I heard sirens and some yelling. Later that day
on the news I saw the man who murdered the train master was
caught on 53rd St. trying to break in to the
bank. He was dragged in handcuffs in to the county jail and
locked up for life. I will never forget that day.
The Million Dollar Mystery
Kiara
On
Friday night at seven o’clock a million dollars was
stolen from the bank. It happened when my uncle was working
there. A tall man broke through the window and
yelled, ‘This is a robbery!’ Everyone was terrified. My
uncle rushed to a telephone booth to call the police.
Suddenly gunshots exploded in the building! Luckily, nobody
was hurt. My uncle heard sirens in the distance. The police
were coming! More gunshots rang out. Would the police get
there in time? About five minutes later the sheriff’s car
pulled up and the door opened. The captain of the
police stepped out. The tall man shouted, ‘You’ll never
catch me coppers! I’m leaving on a trip!’ Suddenly my
uncle came out of nowhere and tackled the tall man! The
captain put handcuffs on the tall man and took him to jail.
My uncle said he would never forget that night.
Mystery Robbery
Jarrod
I was
taking a car ride on Friday night at seven o’clock.
After a while I stopped at a telephone booth to make
a call. When I got off the phone I went to a restaurant to
eat. Then I overheard some people at another table saying
that they were going to rob a cruise ship for a million
dollars. As soon as they got up I followed them to the
ship. When we got on the ship I told the captain
about them stealing the money and he ran to the safe! By the
time that the captain got to the safe he was so tired that
he didn’t stand a chance against the robbers. The captain
was a tall man though and he put up a fight, but
after a while the robbers pushed him overboard. I called the
police and they arrested the men as soon as they got there.
When nobody found the captain the police claimed that he
left on a trip. Everything ended up okay.
The Captains Mystery
April
The captain is a great person. Friday night at
seven o’ clock the captain of the ship The Late Night
Bite had went into his money account and saw a million
dollars. He had woundered where he had gotten a million
dollars. That night the captain was thinking about the a
million dollars. Then that day he went to the Region Shore
Bank to see if anyone was missing a million dollars. The
only person that was missing money was Tiffany Wit. She was
missing $50. That afternoon the captain went to the
telephone booth and called the Chippewa Bank. To see if
anybody was missing a million dollars. The lady said one
person was missing a million dollars. So the captain told
the lady he would go to the Highway Fighting Jail and see
what was going on. The sheriff said the only one stealing
money that they know of was Dwine Line. The officer said
he’s in Montana and mabe we can catch him before he gets to
Washington. So the captain said looks like were leaving
on a trip. When they got to the Late Night Bite a
tall man came out of the trees staring at the captain.
When the captain yeld out asking the tall man if he had lost
a million dollars the man just stood there. Finally the
captain got on the ship and the tall man whispered it’s your
punk. Then all of a sudden police from everywhere came out
and stopped the ship from leaving. From inside the police
arrested the captain and took him to the honey bee police
station. At the police station the captain asked what is
going on. The police said he was arrested from stealing a
million dollars out of Matt Deleon’s bank account. The
captain told the police that he did not do it but they threw
him in jail anyways. Then the tall man appered and said fine
I stole the money out of the account and put it in is so he
would go to jail. Then the police grabbed the tall man and
locked him up and they let the captain go. When the captain
got back to his ship he told the officer that they were not
going anywhere. Then that night all the familys had a big
party. The captain is a great man.
The Letter
Bobby
Dear Uncle Jim,
I am writing this
note to explain what happened Friday night at seven
o’clock. This is how it began I had a few friends over
and there names are Austin, Kyle Tighe, and Jarrod. All of a
sudden we were playing monopoly and we saw a man not just
any man a tall man. He was going into a red
telephone booth and he had a suspicious looking
briefcase. We were all so suspicious that Jarrod had a
bright idea and he went and listened to the conversation the
tall man was having. When Jarrod got back he said that the
tall man was talking to the captain about leaving
on a trip. Boom crack the door to my bedroom smacked
rite open. All of a sudden the tall man was in my bedroom!
He started to yell at us and tolled us not to tell anybody
what we heard him talking about in the phone booth. He
didn’t even notice but Officer Mark was standing behind him
and slapped a pair of handcuffs on him. When Officer Mark
got him into the police car we had to look in the brief
case. We found a million dollars in the brief case.
We found out the tall man can’t come to Michigan were we
live ever again!
Sincerely,
Your nephew bobby
The Mystery Of The Ship
Makayla
A tall
man named Fred was going on a cruise. Fred had to leave
at 3 o’clock on Thursday morning. Fred got to the cruise
ship at Friday night at seven o’clock. He got settled
and went to talk to his friend. His friends name was BOB.
Bob said a million dollar man died two days a go. The police
are trying to find who killed him. Fred said I will find out
who killed him. So Fred started looking for clues. Fred
went to go talk to the captain. The captain said a
taxi pick him up at a telephone booth. He said to the
taxi driver he was leaving on a tripe. A cruise said
the taxi man yes said the million dollar man. Fred said it
must be the taxi man how killed him. So Fred went to the
taxi mans cabin and the taxi man confest. To the killing. So
he went to jail and Fred injoed the rest of the cruise.
The Big Robbery
Mercedes
One night at
seven o’clock I saw a tall man. He was at a telephone
booth talking to someone. He was dressed if he was a
captain. He was telling the person on the phone to meet
him ten o’clock to rob a bank in Frankford and get a
million. He was telling the person on the telephone when
they get the money to leave and say they are leaving for
a trip. Then the next morning I saw Frankford bank got
robbed at ten thirty on the television. And I saw that man
on television with his picture saying wanted. This all took
place on Saturday night on coast highway.
Sincerely Mercedes |
Mystery Note
Jacob
Dear Captain,
Meet me
at a telephone both at Friday night at seven
o’clock. I am a tall man with a captain
hat on. I will have a million dollars. If you don’t
show up you will never get your money. I am leaving on a
trip on Saturday morning. I know you won’t miss out on a
chance this big.
From,
Your million dollar man
The Mystery of the Tall Man
Grace
It was
Friday night at seven o’clock when I heard the door bell
ring. I ran down the stairs an answered it. It was a tall
man that looked like he just came from work, in a gray
suit and a brief case. He looked very suspicious. All of a
sudden I saw a green thing. It looked like a piece of money.
Then he said” is your dad here”. I said “you just missed him
he left on a trip about an hour ago”. Then the man
walked to the telephone booth. After the man left the
telephone booth I ran over there. I seen a card that said”
Captain Jim Bob”. Then I ran to my house and looked
in the phone book. I found his name and it showed he lived
on a boat. I ran out of the house to the marina. I got there
just in time before the guy with the suit case came. I
knocked on each boat until I came to Captain Jim Bob’s boat.
I told him that a guy with money in his suit case was
coming. So we got a net and when he came we got him. His
suit case fell in the water when we got him. So we had to
get it with a net. When I opened it up there was a
million dollars in it. We called the police and he went
to jail. I got the million dollars for finding him. He was
wanted by the FBI.
The Man in the Black Coat
Alexis
Okay it
all started out Friday night at seven o’clock. I was
with my friends Ashley and Kailen. We were walking down the
street by a telephone booth, when suddenly a tall
man walked in. He had a big black coat a top hat and a
brief case. I got scared when I saw he had a gun in his back
pocket. He seemed angry so we jumped into the bushes that
covered the side of the telephone booth. We hid there for a
couple of minutes and then we heard him get calmer and
calmer. It sounded to me like he was leaving on a trip.
Then we jumped out of the bushes, but we jumped out to
early. By the time we got out we found ourselves right
behind the man’s back. He must have heard us and he suddenly
turned around, “Good evening girls. Lovely night isn’t it?”
he said. “Yes,” I said. He said goodnight to us and left.
But what he didn’t know was we were fallowing him, we were
staying hidden behind the bushes. None of us knew why we
fallowed him but we just seemed drawn to him, like we were
the detectives and he was the suspect. Then pretty soon we
saw him walk into the S.S. Bloom. We fallowed him to the
docks but didn’t get on bored. That’s when we heard him talk
to the captain. “Do you have it?” the captain asked.
“Yes, I’ve got the million right here,” he said. Then
the ship started to lift up the anchor and left the docks.
After that we took an oath to never say a word to anyone
about this. But some days I do wonder what happened to the
man and the captain, well better safe then sorry.
When I was Scared
Ashlee
A captain
was at a telephone booth waiting for some one.
He looks suspicious
he looks all around to see if anyone was their. HE look at
me and then ran to lake Michigan. I look their was a big
boat sitting right their it scared me.
It was Friday
night at seven o’clock
there was the big
tall man with a black hat and a black suit. It was on
Halloween night. The guy was leaving on a trip was
fowling him. He put down his suit case I pick it up and took
it home and open the case there was a million dollars
in the suit case I scream.
The Haunted Man Mystery
McKayla H.
It was Friday at
seven o clock. I was just leaving the telephone both.
As I was walking out of the telephone booth I saw a tall
man walking on the side walk. He was about seven feet
tall and walking a huge Great Dane. He was walking to a
ship. There was a captain driving the ship. The man
had a million dollar watch then he stole a million
dollars from the cash box. Then I tried to catch him but
before I could the ship was leaving on a trip.
The Tall Man
Kassie
It was Friday
night at seven o’clock. I was walking on my way home
from the library. A tall man was fowling me. I got
very scared! So I ran the rest the way home. My mom left to
go to the captain market. So I was locked out and I
ran to the neighbors. The neighbors let me in and I said a
tall man was fowling me. So they called the police from a
telephone booth. My mom put in the newspaper that who
found the tall man will get one million dollars. The
next day the tall man tried to leave on a trip but a
huge net got the man. The person that put the net up was a
woman named Soo Lee. Soo Lee got one million dollars. The
tall man went to jail. Soo lee my mom and I lived happy ever
after.
The Mystery This Summer
Tighe
Dear Kyle,
This year I saw
something exciting! One day when I was calling Austin in a
telephone booth I saw a tall man with a
strange suitcase. I saw the man on Friday night at seven
O` clock. It looked as if he was leaving on a trip.
It turns out the tall man was the captain of the S.S.
Beach Boy. Also it turns out the suitcase had a million
dollars in it. Apparently he stole a million dollars
from the bank so he bought the S.S. Beach Boy with the
money. He was arrested a week later by Bobby Florian. This
is one thing that happened to me this summer.+
Your friend,
Tighe
Mystery Of The Tall Guy
Taler
A tall man is leaving on a trip. Follow him
agent x and watch how he acts. On Friday night at seven
o’clock he will phone someone at the telephone both.
When he’s done agent x hack in to the telephone both main
microchip to see who he called. He will jump in to a cab and
go back to his house. When gets to his house he will go in
to change. That’s where you come in agent x so you can spy
on him. The tall man will come out wearing something
different. So you will have to keep a close eye on him agent
x. The tall man will have a brief case in his hands that
holds a million dollars in it. Then the tall man will
jump in another cab to meet a ‘’ The Captain’’ by the
S.S. Badger. Then sneak in and arrest the tall man and
interview ‘’ The Captain’’ and bring back the data. The
agency is counting on you agent x please do a good job.
The Haunted Man Mystery
McKayla
It was Friday at
seven o clock. I was just leaving the telephone both.
As I was walking out of the telephone booth I saw a tall
man walking on the side walk. He was about seven feet
tall and walking a huge Great Dane. He was walking to a
ship. There was a captain driving the ship. The man
had a million dollar watch then he stole a million
dollars from the cash box. Then I tried to catch him but
before I could the ship was leaving on a trip.
A Note to Megan
Brooke
Dear Megan,
Friday night seven o clock I was in bed watching a
movie when a loud bang pounded at my ear. I looked outside.
A tall man had a gun in one hand and a suite case in
the other. He didn’t look like he was leaving on a
trip he looked suspicious. I screamed my head off. Seth
rushed upstairs to see what had happed. He saw a
telephone booth outside that I had not seen yet. He
rushed over their and called the cops. They arrested the
man. He had a million dollars in the suite case.
Mystery Man
Austin
Dear Nick,
I’m writing you
this note because it is really suspicious. A couple weeks
ago we were leaving on a trip when I saw a tall
man carrying a brief case, so I told my mom to wait so I
could watch him. Then I noticed my friend Jarrod walking his
dog Max when the tall man pulled out a gun and shot him on
Friday night at seven-o-clock. Then he got in a car
and drove off so we followed him to the city were he stopped
got out and went to a telephone booth. He said
something about a missing captain right then
Makayla.S came walking with a cat when he shot both of them
too. After that I called the cops and they came and Officer
Kyle arrested him and we got paid 2 million dollars. So was
I right was it suspicious.
Sincerely,
Your cousin
Austin
The Mystery on Friday Night
Michele
I was
walking down the street on Friday night at seven ‘o’
clock. That’s when I saw a tall man, wearing a
face mask, and a fancy suit. Then I thought I saw a
million dollars in his hand. I about fainted! That’s
when I saw him leave to go on a trip. He was going on
a trip in a boat. Before I could stop the caption, he
drove away. So I quickly ran to the telephone booth,
and I called the police. They rushed over. That’s when a
women came out crying. She said that someone in a face mask,
and a suit, stole a million dollars. Then the police found
the man and put him in jail. The woman got her money back,
and lived happily ever after.
The Mystery of Nick is missing!
Matt
I was
leaving on a trip on Friday night seven o’clock.
My friend Nick was very sad. A tall man took Nick. I
told my mom. I had to stay bake. My mom said no. I said but
mom. My mom said NO. I ran out of the door of the taxi. I
went back to the house. Than I lock the door so my mom and
dad. The tall man was in the house. He had big black
briefcase with a million dollars. The tall man was
warring a captain's hat .I though he was the
captain. I ran out of the house to a telephone booth
the tall man was following me. The tall man had a name tag
on his name was ‘BOB’. I thought it was boom for a minute. I
said wart is Nick. Bob said nothing. Than bob said at the
gear year .than bob left I came out of the telephone booth.
Than I called a taxi cab and then I went to the grave yard.
I than said, oh no there is my mom and dad. The tall man had
Nick at the grave yard. Then I found him in a box and could
not get him out. Then all at once the box broke open. Then
I called the cops to get Bob.0
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