FCAs 

  1. Use the six fragments and underline them
  2. Flowing mystery
  3. Complete paragraph

The Million Dollar Case
Lauren

          On Friday night at seven o’ clock I saw a tall man in a telephone booth. He looked very suspicious. I wondered about him all night. The next night I was by an old dark alley by Main St. I saw the same tall man I did last night. I over heard them talking, the tall man said to the other man, you’re the captain what do I do to help? The captain said, tomorrow we leaving on a trip to Washington D.C. I hear they got over a million dollars locked up in there. After I heard that I was scared, these were bad people I’ve got to be careful. So I walked home. A few hours past and I went to the county police station, I told them about the two men and the money they said that they would look out for them. Five hours past and I got a call from the police station and the woman said, We think we found them can you come and see? I said yes. When I got there I saw them and they were the ones! I was so happy they caught them. The woman said they would go to court the next day. The next day I woke up to a phone call and the woman said they were found guilty. I was happy yet again. I think some day I will have my own detective agency.

The Awesome Mystery
Mark

           On Friday night at seven o’clock it was raining and lighting out. There was a tall man waking down the street. Then the tall man put a brief case down by a telephone booth and the man waked off. I went outside to the brief case and opened it up and there was a million dollars in it. Then I ran to the captain but he was leafing on a trip. So the captain was not there then I went home with a million dollars. 

The Tall Man On Friday Night
Kassidy

Something suspicious happened on Friday night at seven o’clock. I was watching T.V. when suddenly I saw something out of my window. I got up and looked around. I didn’t see anything. So I watched T.V. again. There it was again. A tall man was walking into a telephone both. All of the sudden I heard a huge noise. I looked out the window I saw a man shoot on the ground. I called the cops. They said the man was leaving on a trip and was a captain. Also they found a million dollars in his pocket and as soon as they found the killer they would put him in jail. Friday was very scary.

Freaky Friday
Kyle

     I was very scared one night. That night I was with Jarrod, Bobby, Austin, and Tighe. On Friday night at seven o’clock we were going to the Ghost Ship in Manistee. We waited for Bobby to get there so we found a telephone booth and called him. Then he showed up at 7:30. After he got there we went into the Ghost Ship. When we got in we were shocked because Jarrod was already gone because the captain grabbed him for a tour around the wheelhouse. As we were walking a case with a million dollars in it popped open! So Austin went for the money and a tall man popped out and said “no money for you”! and slapped Austin, and then vanished. As soon as e disappeared Jarrod popped out a hidden door. So ten we got off the Ghost Ship and Jarrod slipped and fell on his butt! He was okay. Then Bobby told us that he was leaving on a trip to Mexico for a week. It was 9:30 so everybody left and Tighe was scared all night long. This Friday was very freaky!!    

The Great Mystery
Kelly

          On Friday night at seven o’clock I saw a tall man with a tan trench coat, a black top hat, and a brief case. I saw him on my way to the movies with some friends. While we were on our way he stopped at a restaurant called Captain’s Café. On the specials sign I saw the captain’s supreme. On our way back from the movies at about nine o’clock we saw the man paying for his meal and in his brief case was a MILLION DOLLARS! Then we hid behind a dumpster and saw him walking into Penn Station. We were guessing he was leaving on a trip. The next morning my mom was reading the paper and I saw on the cover suspicious man murders train master. The cops found the train master in his chair with a knife in his throat. I called my friend Jenny from a telephone booth since we don’t have a house phone yet. Her mom answered so I asked if Jenny was there and her mom said hold on a minute. When Jenny answered I asked her if she read what happened in the paper. After that she said the man hasn’t been caught yet. Then I walked back to my house and had some breakfast. A few hours later I heard sirens and some yelling. Later that day on the news I saw the man who murdered the train master was caught on 53rd St. trying to break in to the bank. He was dragged in handcuffs in to the county jail and locked up for life. I will never forget that day.  

The Million Dollar Mystery
Kiara

          On Friday night at seven o’clock a million dollars was stolen from the bank. It happened when my uncle was working there. A tall man broke through the window and yelled, ‘This is a robbery!’ Everyone was terrified. My uncle rushed to a telephone booth to call the police. Suddenly gunshots exploded in the building! Luckily, nobody was hurt. My uncle heard sirens in the distance. The police were coming! More gunshots rang out. Would the police get there in time? About five minutes later the sheriff’s car pulled up and the door opened. The captain of the police stepped out. The tall man shouted, ‘You’ll never catch me coppers! I’m leaving on a trip!’ Suddenly my uncle came out of nowhere and tackled the tall man! The captain put handcuffs on the tall man and took him to jail. My uncle said he would never forget that night.

Mystery Robbery
Jarrod

          I was taking a car ride on Friday night at seven o’clock. After a while I stopped at a telephone booth to make a call. When I got off the phone I went to a restaurant to eat. Then I overheard some people at another table saying that they were going to rob a cruise ship for a million dollars. As soon as they got up I followed them to the ship. When we got on the ship I told the captain about them stealing the money and he ran to the safe! By the time that the captain got to the safe he was so tired that he didn’t stand a chance against the robbers. The captain was a tall man though and he put up a fight, but after a while the robbers pushed him overboard. I called the police and they arrested the men as soon as they got there. When nobody found the captain the police claimed that he left on a trip. Everything ended up okay.         

The Captains Mystery

April

                   The captain is a great person. Friday night at seven o’ clock the captain of the ship The Late Night Bite had went into his money account and saw a million dollars. He had woundered where he had gotten a million dollars. That night the captain was thinking about the a million dollars. Then that day he went to the Region Shore Bank to see if anyone was missing a million dollars. The only person that was missing money was Tiffany Wit. She was missing $50. That afternoon the captain went to the telephone booth and called the Chippewa Bank. To see if anybody was missing a million dollars. The lady said one person was missing a million dollars. So the captain told the lady he would go to the Highway Fighting Jail and see what was going on. The sheriff said the only one stealing money that they know of was Dwine Line. The officer said he’s in Montana and mabe we can catch him before he gets to Washington. So the captain said looks like were leaving on a trip. When they got to the Late Night Bite a tall man came out of the trees staring at the captain. When the captain yeld out asking the tall man if he had lost a million dollars the man just stood there. Finally the captain got on the ship and the tall man whispered it’s your punk. Then all of a sudden police from everywhere came out and stopped the ship from leaving. From inside the police arrested the captain and took him to the honey bee police station. At the police station the captain asked what is going on. The police said he was arrested from stealing a million dollars out of Matt Deleon’s bank account. The captain told the police that he did not do it but they threw him in jail anyways. Then the tall man appered and said fine I stole the money out of the account and put it in is so he would go to jail. Then the police grabbed the tall man and locked him up and they let the captain go. When the captain got back to his ship he told the officer that they were not going anywhere. Then that night all the familys had a big party. The captain is a great man.

The Letter
Bobby

Dear Uncle Jim,

 I am writing this note to explain what happened Friday night at seven o’clock. This is how it began I had a few friends over and there names are Austin, Kyle Tighe, and Jarrod. All of a sudden we were playing monopoly and we saw a man not just any man a tall man. He was going into a red telephone booth and he had a suspicious looking briefcase. We were all so suspicious that Jarrod had a bright idea and he went and listened to the conversation the tall man was having. When Jarrod got back he said that the tall man was talking to the captain about leaving on a trip. Boom crack the door to my bedroom smacked rite open. All of a sudden the tall man was in my bedroom! He started to yell at us and tolled us not to tell anybody what we heard him talking about in the phone booth. He didn’t even notice but Officer Mark was standing behind him and slapped a pair of handcuffs on him. When Officer Mark got him into the police car we had to look in the brief case. We found a million dollars in the brief case. We found out the tall man can’t come to Michigan were we live ever again!

 Sincerely,
Your nephew bobby

The Mystery Of The Ship
Makayla

          A tall man named Fred was going on a cruise. Fred had to leave at 3 o’clock on Thursday morning. Fred got to the cruise ship at Friday night at seven o’clock. He got settled and went to talk to his friend. His friends name was BOB. Bob said a million dollar man died two days a go. The police are trying to find who killed him. Fred said I will find out who killed him. So Fred started looking for clues.  Fred went to go talk to the captain. The captain said a taxi pick him up at a telephone booth. He said to the taxi driver he was leaving on a tripe. A cruise said the taxi man yes said the million dollar man. Fred said it must be the taxi man how killed him. So Fred went to the taxi mans cabin and the taxi man confest. To the killing. So he went to jail and Fred injoed the rest of the cruise. 

The Big Robbery
Mercedes

One night at seven o’clock I saw a tall man. He was at a telephone booth talking to someone. He was dressed if he was a captain. He was telling the person on the phone to meet him ten o’clock to rob a bank in Frankford and get a million. He was telling the person on the telephone when they get the money to leave and say they are leaving for a trip. Then the next morning I saw Frankford bank got robbed at ten thirty on the television. And I saw that man on television with his picture saying wanted. This all took place on Saturday night on coast highway.         
Sincerely Mercedes

Mystery Note
Jacob

Dear Captain,

          Meet me at a telephone both at Friday night at seven o’clock. I am a tall man with a captain hat on. I will have a million dollars. If you don’t show up you will never get your money. I am leaving on a trip on Saturday morning. I know you won’t miss out on a chance this big.

From,
Your million dollar man

The Mystery of the Tall Man
Grace

          It was Friday night at seven o’clock when I heard the door bell ring. I ran down the stairs an answered it. It was a tall man that looked like he just came from work, in a gray suit and a brief case. He looked very suspicious. All of a sudden I saw a green thing. It looked like a piece of money. Then he said” is your dad here”. I said “you just missed him he left on a trip about an hour ago”. Then the man walked to the telephone booth. After the man left the telephone booth I ran over there. I seen a card that said” Captain Jim Bob”. Then I ran to my house and looked in the phone book. I found his name and it showed he lived on a boat. I ran out of the house to the marina. I got there just in time before the guy with the suit case came. I knocked on each boat until I came to Captain Jim Bob’s boat. I told him that a guy with money in his suit case was coming. So we got a net and when he came we got him. His suit case fell in the water when we got him. So we had to get it with a net. When I opened it up there was a million dollars in it. We called the police and he went to jail. I got the million dollars for finding him. He was wanted by the FBI.

The Man in the Black Coat
Alexis

          Okay it all started out Friday night at seven o’clock. I was with my friends Ashley and Kailen. We were walking down the street by a telephone booth, when suddenly a tall man walked in. He had a big black coat a top hat and a brief case. I got scared when I saw he had a gun in his back pocket. He seemed angry so we jumped into the bushes that covered the side of the telephone booth. We hid there for a couple of minutes and then we heard him get calmer and calmer. It sounded to me like he was leaving on a trip. Then we jumped out of the bushes, but we jumped out to early. By the time we got out we found ourselves right behind the man’s back. He must have heard us and he suddenly turned around, “Good evening girls. Lovely night isn’t it?” he said. “Yes,” I said. He said goodnight to us and left. But what he didn’t know was we were fallowing him, we were staying hidden behind the bushes. None of us knew why we fallowed him but we just seemed drawn to him, like we were the detectives and he was the suspect. Then pretty soon we saw him walk into the S.S. Bloom. We fallowed him to the docks but didn’t get on bored. That’s when we heard him talk to the captain. “Do you have it?” the captain asked. “Yes, I’ve got the million right here,” he said. Then the ship started to lift up the anchor and left the docks. After that we took an oath to never say a word to anyone about this. But some days I do wonder what happened to the man and the captain, well better safe then sorry.

When I was Scared
Ashlee

A captain was at a telephone booth waiting for some one.

He looks suspicious he looks all around to see if anyone was their. HE look at me and then ran to lake Michigan. I look their was a big boat sitting right their it scared me.

It was Friday night at seven o’clock  there was the big tall man with a black hat and a black suit. It was on Halloween night. The guy was leaving on a trip was fowling him. He put down his suit case I pick it up and took it home and open the case there was a million dollars in the suit case I scream.

The Haunted Man Mystery
McKayla H.

It was Friday at seven o clock. I was just leaving the telephone both. As I was walking out of the telephone booth I saw a tall man walking on the side walk. He was about seven feet tall and walking a huge Great Dane. He was walking to a ship. There was a captain driving the ship. The man had a million dollar watch then he stole a million dollars from the cash box. Then I tried to catch him but before I could the ship was leaving on a trip.   

The Tall Man
Kassie

It was Friday night at seven o’clock. I was walking on my way home from the library. A tall man was fowling me. I got very scared! So I ran the rest the way home. My mom left to go to the captain market. So I was locked out and I ran to the neighbors. The neighbors let me in and I said a tall man was fowling me. So they called the police from a telephone booth. My mom put in the newspaper that who found the tall man will get one million dollars. The next day the tall man tried to leave on a trip but a huge net got the man. The person that put the net up was a woman named Soo Lee. Soo Lee got one million dollars. The tall man went to jail. Soo lee my mom and I lived happy ever after.

The Mystery This Summer
Tighe

Dear Kyle,

This year I saw something exciting! One day when I was calling Austin in a telephone booth I saw a tall man with a strange suitcase. I saw the man on Friday night at seven O` clock. It looked as if he was leaving on a trip. It turns out the tall man was the captain of the S.S. Beach Boy. Also it turns out the suitcase had a million dollars in it. Apparently he stole a million dollars from the bank so he bought the S.S. Beach Boy with the money. He was arrested a week later by Bobby Florian. This is one thing that happened to me this summer.+ 

Your friend,
Tighe

Mystery Of The Tall Guy
Taler

A tall man  is leaving on a trip.  Follow him agent x and watch how he acts. On Friday night at seven o’clock he will phone someone at the telephone both. When he’s done agent x hack in to the telephone both main microchip to see who he called. He will jump in to a cab and go back to his house. When gets to his house he will go in to change. That’s where you come in agent x so you can spy on him. The tall man will come out wearing something different. So you will have to keep a close eye on him agent x.  The tall man will have a brief case in his hands that holds a million dollars in it. Then the tall man will jump in another cab to meet a ‘’ The Captain’’ by the S.S. Badger. Then sneak in and arrest the tall man and interview ‘’ The Captain’’ and bring back the data. The agency is counting on you agent x please do a good job.  

The Haunted Man Mystery
McKayla

It was Friday at seven o clock. I was just leaving the telephone both. As I was walking out of the telephone booth I saw a tall man walking on the side walk. He was about seven feet tall and walking a huge Great Dane. He was walking to a ship. There was a captain driving the ship. The man had a million dollar watch then he stole a million dollars from the cash box. Then I tried to catch him but before I could the ship was leaving on a trip

A Note to Megan
Brooke

Dear Megan,

                   Friday night seven o clock I was in bed watching a movie when a loud bang pounded at my ear. I looked outside. A tall man had a gun in one hand and a suite case in the other. He didn’t look like he was leaving on a trip he looked suspicious. I screamed my head off. Seth rushed upstairs to see what had happed. He saw a telephone booth outside that I had not seen yet. He rushed over their and called the cops. They arrested the man. He had a million dollars in the suite case.

Mystery Man
Austin

Dear Nick,

I’m writing you this note because it is really suspicious. A couple weeks ago we were leaving on a trip when I saw a tall man carrying a brief case, so I told my mom to wait so I could watch him. Then I noticed my friend Jarrod walking his dog Max when the tall man pulled out a gun and shot him on Friday night at seven-o-clock. Then he got in a car and drove off so we followed him to the city were he stopped got out and went to a telephone booth. He said something about a missing captain right then Makayla.S came walking with a cat when he shot both of them too. After that I called the cops and they came and Officer Kyle arrested him and we got paid 2 million dollars. So was I right was it suspicious. 

Sincerely,
Your cousin
Austin

The Mystery on Friday Night
Michele

          I was walking down the street on Friday night at seven ‘o’ clock. That’s when I saw a tall man, wearing a face mask, and a fancy suit. Then I thought I saw a million dollars in his hand. I about fainted! That’s when I saw him leave to go on a trip. He was going on a trip in a boat. Before I could stop the caption, he drove away. So I quickly ran to the telephone booth, and I called the police. They rushed over. That’s when a women came out crying. She said that someone in a face mask, and a suit, stole a million dollars. Then the police found the man and put him in jail. The woman got her money back, and lived happily ever after.

The Mystery of Nick is missing!
Matt

          I was leaving on a trip on Friday night seven o’clock. My friend Nick was very sad. A tall man took Nick. I told my mom. I had to stay bake. My mom said no. I said but mom. My mom said NO.  I ran out of the door of the taxi. I went back to the house. Than I lock the door so my mom and dad. The tall man was in the house. He had big black briefcase with a million dollars. The tall man was warring a captain's hat .I though he was the captain.  I ran out of the house to a telephone booth the tall man was following me. The tall man had a name tag on his name was ‘BOB’. I thought it was boom for a minute. I said wart is Nick. Bob said nothing. Than bob said at the gear year .than bob left I came out of the telephone booth. Than I called a taxi cab and then I went to the grave yard. I than said, oh no there is my mom and dad. The tall man had Nick at the grave yard.  Then I found him in a box and could not get him out.  Then all at once the box broke open.  Then I called the cops to get Bob.0

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