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Summary of James and the Giant Peach Chapter

2006-2007

James and the Giant Peach
Nisah

In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his insect friends are on an exciting adventure! They are on a giant peach. The peach is in middle of the ocean. While James and his friends are scurrying around, and crying out for help, sharks start to attack. James has a great idea to use his friends silk worm and miss spider to spin their silk to lure seagulls, then they will be saved by the seagulls lifting the giant peach out of the water. They are saved! 

James and the giant peach
Mariah

In the story, James and the giant peach James and his bug friends go on an adventure! They have to ride on in the sea on the peach. They have to get away from hungry sharks by tieing seagulls to the peach steam. A lot have cloud men throw ice at them and be bad people. They get to see a rainbow be made. Finally they make it and live a very happy life forever.

James and the Giant Peach
Faith

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exciting adventure! James and his friends are on a giant peach in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. They are trapped on the peach in the ocean and sharks are attacking them. They get stuck on the giant peach in the ocean. They see something moving in the water and then they notice that they are sharks. James uses worm to luar in some seagulls. Then they tie string around the seagulls necks. After a wile they get 502 seagulls to lift up the peach.

James and the Giant Peach
Logan

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exciting adventure! Only that it is also a scary adventure too because they are trapped in the Atlantic Ocean on a giant peach with sharks attacking them.  To get to land they need to fly the peach to land or else the sharks will eat them.  So they tie strings around seagulls necks to fly the peach away!  So they tie silk from the silkworm and spider around the seagulls necks to fly the peach to land.  James and his friends lure the seagulls in by putting the big juicy worm out for bait.  That’s how James and the bugs were saved from the sharks!!

James and the Giant Peach
Claire

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends were floating in the water. They were on a giant peach. They see a white mini sail. Then they see a many more coming. They were sharks! The sharks suddenly go right up to the peach and start digging their teeth in it and dragging it down. All of the bugs frantically asked James what to do. He looped seagulls with silk made by earthworm and spider’s silk, using earthworm as bait. Then, he ties the other end of the string to the stem of the peach. After getting lots of seagulls, the peach started to lift out of the water and away from the sharks. The peach, all of the bugs and James were safe from the sharks.

James and the Giant Peach
Lexi

In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exciting adventure.  On the adventure James and the bugs are trapped on a giant peach in the Atlantic Ocean.  James and the bugs are trapped on the ocean and being attacked by hungry sharks.  James figures out a plan to get his bug friends and his self off the peach and on to shore.  They hooked 502 birds to the stem of the peach, and the birds will fly the peach out of the water, and bring James and his bug friends to shore.  So the birds flew them to shore and they didn’t get eaten by hungry sharks. 

James and the Giant Peach
Alex

In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his buggy friends are on an exciting adventure. They are trapped in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean on a peach. Not something you would want to do at short notice. Also being attacked by sharks does not make it any nicer. They are starting to sink lower in the water. James then has a brilliant idea. James catches a lot of seagulls and ties them to the stem of the peach. It is lifted out of the water and they fly away.

James and the Giant Peach
Sierra

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his friends are on an exciting adventure! James and his Buggy friends are trapped on a giant peach in the middle of the ocean. Tan there is a huge problem! Sharks are attacking the peach! James and his friends are catching and harnessing the seagulls. But will earthworm be bait? Will he do it? James and his friends catch and harness one seagull after another. Soon he gets 502 seagulls! But will it be good enough to fly away from the sharks? Or will they be eaten?  

James and the Giant Peach
Mikelle

Have you ever imagined being in the ocean on a giant peach! Well in the story James and the Giant peach James and his bug friends are on an exiting adventure. James and his big friends get stranded on a giant peach. There is a big problem for James and his friends sharks are attacking them. They are surrounded by these man size beasts. Then James thinks of a brainy idea. James tells his friends they don’t think it is so brainy. The bugs finally agree to the idea. So miss spider and silk worm get stated on the string. Earthworm is scared to death of being eaten. James and his friends get started the plan works the seagulls lift them out of the water and away they go while the seagull lead the way.           

James and the Giant Peach
John

In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are exciting adventure! James and his friends land in the Atlantic Ocean still on a huge peach. James and his friends see something move in the water they are sharks and the sharks started eating the peach. Quickly James thinks of an idea. He will lift the peach out of the water using seagulls. James has 501 seagulls and they were off. James and his were off on a another adventure.

James and the Giant Peach
Sam.B
 

          In story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug and or insect buddies are on an exciting adventure! They are stuck on a this-this giant peach in the middle of the Atlantic ocean?! Now, you maybe thinking, “ Big deal!!” but there is  a twist, the peach is being attacked!! It just so  happens that these-these things that are attacking the peach are sharks, and they’re eating the peach  so that they can eventually eat You, James, the bugs and I! Don’t fret though, ‘cause James has a plan! Were going to catch seagulls, and tie them to the peach so that they will lift you, James, the bugs, and I to safety!!! We are saved!!!!

James and the Giant Peach
William

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exciting adventure! They are trapped on a giant peach in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean and are being attacked! Sharks are attacking the peach furiously. They tied seagulls to the peach stem and it was lifted out of the water and floated away.

James and the Giant Peach
Brittany H.

In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his friends are on an exciting adventure! In the ocean on a peach. They are traded on a giant peach in the ocean being attacked. The sharks are eating the peach. Then seagulls came and were peaking at the peach. Then they use Earthworm for bait so they don’t get ate by sharks. Then Earthworm saves the day. Yiks, what an adventure!!

James and the Giant Peach
Lauren

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exciting adventure! However they are on a giant peach in the Atlantic Ocean. Meanwhile they stumble across a problem they are being attacked.  Sharks are attacking them and they are trying to find a way out of the situation.  They are trying to catch enough seagulls and tie them to the peach so they can float away in the air.  They finally catch enough seagulls so they can float away into the horizon.

James and the Giant Peach
Haley

In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exciting adventure! James and the bugs are in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. James and the bugs are trapped on a giant peach in the middle of the shark infested Atlantic Ocean and they are being attacked! James and the bugs are getting worried….. sharks are eating away at the peach. They then decide to tie strings around the seagulls to lift them off of the water. Eventually they tie 502 seagulls to the peach and the seagulls actually lifted the peach right up out of the water! That’s about the extent of James and his friends exciting adventure.

James and the Giant Peach
Dan K.

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exiting adventure! James is on a giant peach in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. The worst part of that is that they are surrounded by sharks! Everybody started panicking because of that. The problem was that they were chewing on the peach. James had to think of a plan to get them out of the water without any equipment. The only way was if they had rope, but James forgot about Miss Spider. Miss Spider could spin silk stronger than any rope. James didn’t see the silkworm in the peach either. Miss Spider was with silkworm the second he found out. He used the silk to catch the seagulls, but he didn’t have bait. He figured that he could use earthworm as bait. James needed the rest to pull him in when a seagull came.

James and the Giant Peach
Cady

In the story James and the Giant peach James and his talking bug friends go on an exciting adventure! Well James and his bug friends get stuck in the Atlantic Ocean on a giant peach. The bugs get scared because the sharks were trying to attack the peach and eat them. The sharks start slicing through the peach. Then finally James thinks of a plan and he hopes it works. They caught many seagulls. Then when they get all the seagulls they need the seagulls lift them out of the water into safety. James and the bugs remained safe and did not get eaten by the big sharks. Luckily the sharks didn’t get them and if the sharks get them who knows what will happen to them.

James and the Giant Peach

Brittany

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exciting adventure. They are on this giant peach and are being attacked James and his friends are being attacked by sharks on the Atlantic Ocean. They’re being attacked because the sharks are eating the peach. Finally they think of a plan the plan is using spider and silkworm’s silk to put around the seagulls neck and lift the peach out of the water. The plan worked in the end! The story James and the Giant Peach  is adventurous.

James and the Giant Peach
Mitchel

          In the story James and the Giant Peach, James and his bug friends are on an exciting adventure. He is on a peach in the ocean. They are trapped on the peach with sharks attacking the peach. They are scared so they ask James for a plan to save them. When James comes up with a plan they think that it is opsrd, but they try it. The plan is to catch seagulls and hope they can fly them out. So they do it and it works!

 

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