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James and the Giant Peach
Brittany

One day James and his bug friends were stranded on a peach in the ocean. There were sharks surrounding the peach and they were starting to bite at the peach. James was thinking, and he came up with an idea. He was to have silkworm and spider spin silk. Then he would have the silk and catch the seagulls. When James lewerd the seagulls in he used earthworm for bait. The seagulls finally the seagulls got trapped in the silk and they were lifted away by the seagulls.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Bryce

One time there was a boy named James stuck on a giant peach with his bug friends. They were stuck in the middle of an ocean. James and his friends were scared because there were sharks all around the giant peach. They were scared because they did not know how to escape. So they thought for awhile. Finally James came up with a plan. They were gonna use earthworm for bait. They captured 1,000 seagulls. The seagulls lifted them out of the water safely and took them to shore. They were all saved. They were happy.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Daniel

James and his bug friends are stuck on a peach in the middle of the ocean. Sharks surrounded them. The sharks were eating the peach. They saw sum seagulls in the air. The spider made some string. They tide it to the stem. Then they tied it to the seagulls. Then off they went. They were finally puled to safety.

James and the giant peach Summery
Emalee

In James and the giant peach, James and his friends are stuck in the ocean, on a giant peach. They don’t know what to do. Soon there are sharks surrounding them. An they don’t know what the sharks are. Until the worm said they are sharks. An they were frightened. So they started to think. They came up with a idea. To get the worm and, the spider to make silk string. So spider made silk string. An worm made silk string. An Jams said the rest of the plan to the others. They were going to uses the worm for bait. An when the seagulls, saw the worm, they would dive at the worm. Spider made silk string. An James said the rest of the worm, they would dive at the worm. An the others would pull the worm bake when the seagulls dived at the worm. An when a seagull dived they would, rap the rope around the seagulls neck. An the seagulls would take them out of the ocean. They had to hurry. Because the sharks were eating the peach. So they got to work. An finally they got all the seagulls. An the peach lifted out of the water. An they lived happily ever after.

James and the Giant Peach
Jacob M.

James and his bug friends were floating on a peach in the middle of the ocean. They were stuck on the peach and sharks were eating the peach. Then James came up with a plan to try to get them out of there. It was to try to tie string and throw it around the seagulls neck so the seagulls can fly James and his bug friends out of there. So then they tried it and it worked but the worm didn’t like the plan because he was the bait. Then all the sudden the seagulls flew James and his bug friends out of the ocean.

James and the Giant Peach Summery
Brandon B.

James and his bug friends were floating on a peach in the middle of the ocean. While they are in the ocean sharks have came and started to eat the peach. The sharks are eating the peach when James has an idea. He tells them that the need to help. Spider made the silk. But spider was getting tired. But centipede was routing the spider on. Worm was the bait for the seagulls. James was the person that tied the string to the seagulls. Then the seagulls lifted them. Then they were out of the water.

James and the Giant Peach Summery
Elizabeth

James and his bug friends were floating on a peach in the middle of an ocean. They were stranded! Then all of the sudden the peach was surrounded by sharks! They got really scared. Then they all looked at James. James had a plan, but it was a crazy one. They would use earthworm as bait to lower the seagulls by the peach so they could catch them with the spiders silk string. Earthworm thought he would be pecked to death, but he wasn’t. they did this 502 times. Then the peach started to lift into the air. They were saved.

James and the Giant Peach: Summary
Emily C.B.

The story James and the Giant Peach is about a boy named James and his giant bug friends. They are on a giant peach in the middle of the ocean. The trouble is, sharks are attacking them! James forms a plan to get out of the water. He asks the spider and the silkworm to spin silk string. His plan is to catch seagulls with the string, using the earthworm as bait. Then the seagulls will lift the peach into the air. The plan works, and 502 seagulls lift them into the air.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Joe

James and his bug friends were in the ocean floating on a giant peach. They were stuck in the ocean. Sharks came up to the peach. The sharks started to eat the peach, so they could get to the bugs and James. Then seagulls came to eat the bugs and James. James had a plain. He had the silkworm and Mss Spider to spin a silk rope, so they could catch the seagulls and fly away. They used earthworm for bait. They caught 501 seagulls and they needed one more to fly away. They caught it and they flew away from the sharks.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Miranda

James and his bug friends were stuck on the ocean on a giant peach. They were stuck on the peach for a very long time. The only thing for them to eat and drink was peach juice and peach slices. James and his bug friends were having a pretty good time on the peach. All of a sudden James and his bug friends saw sharks! They were panicking and did not know what to do. Then James got an Idea. He told the bugs the idea, but they thought he was mad and crazy. They decided to still do the idea anyway. The idea was to catch some seagulls and pull the peach out of the air. All the bugs played an important part in catching the seagulls. The worm was bait, the grasshopper and ladybug pulled the worm in before the seagulls ate him, and the spider and the silkworm made string. James job was to catch the seagulls. When they finally pulled the boat out of the water with the 502 seagull the sharks stopped eating the peach. The bugs were very happy that they were not going to be eaten.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Joe

James and his bug friends were in the ocean floating on a giant peach. They were stuck in the ocean. Sharks came up to the peach. The sharks started to eat the peach, so they could get to the bugs and James. Then seagulls came to eat the bugs and James. James had a plain. He had the silkworm and Mss Spider to spin a silk rope, so they could catch the seagulls and fly away. They used earthworm for bait. They caught 501 seagulls and they needed one more to fly away. They caught it and they flew away from the sharks.

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