Writing about our experiences…

We couldn’t stop talking about the thunderstorm, so we decided to write a story.

The Thunderstorm

A Class Story by Ms. Eichberger’s First Graders
September 14, 2005

Last night we had a thunderstorm.

The television and the lights turned on and off.

It was really windy and rainy.

The wind blew the screen out of Bobby’s window.

Logan and his friend were on a bike ride.

A tree almost hit them, but they were safe.

Thunderstorms can start fires.

Kyleigh’s cat went outside, but then it came back.

Here are some other quotes from each child’s individual writing.

"We went to my mommy’s friends house." Kassie

"It was really raining hard. I couldn’t sleep." Greg

 

"I was looking out the window." Taler

"I was watching television and it went fuzzy." Jarrod

"I was inside being scared. " Caleb

"Last night was a thunderstorm." Jacob

"I was sleeping during the thunderstorm." Tyler

"I was looking out the window for my cat." Maira.

"It was raining outside. My cat was
outside!" Kyleigh
"The wind blew the screen out of my window." Bobby "There were three fires." Makayla

"It was a bad thunderstorm." Jacob

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