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  1. Include 7 elements
  2. Complete paragraph
  3. Flow

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Brandon G

James and his friends were floating on the peach in the ocean. The sharks were lunging at the peach and taking chunks out of it. James wanted to get away from the sharks so he thought of a plan. His plan was to catch seagulls and lift the peach in to the air with the help of his friends. The peach was lifted in to the air and they flew to safety away from the sharks.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Dylan W.

James and his friends where on a giant peach in the ocean. Then sharks started hurling them selfs at the peach. So James thought they should tie seagulls to the peach and they sad yes. They used worm as bat to tie the seagulls to the peach with Ms, Spiders web. Then they where lifted into the sky with the seagulls.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Jami

James and is bug friends are in the ocean on a Giant peach. While James and is friends were in the ocean sharks started attacking the peach. Everyone started thinking. Then James got a plan! Everyone got a string and cout seagulls and tied them on the peach stem. The seagulls lifted the peach from the ocean and they flown to safty!

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Jennica

In the story James and the Giant Peach there was a young boy named James. He was stuck on a peach out in the middle of the ocean. There were 5 small animals out on the peach with him, all of them on top of the peach with shark eating the peach .James had a great idea to get away from the sharks by using the earthworm as bait to rap the silk string around a seagulls neck. They were lifted into the air and brought to land. They finaly got away from the sharks. James plan was succcesful.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Mariah

James and his friends where floting on a giant peach in the middle of the ocean. James saw some thing in the water. Sharks were atacking the peach! James friends told James to think of a plan to get a way from the sharks. To make the plan work they needed to cach 502 seagulls. They caught the seagulls. All the seagulls lifted the peach out of the water.

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James and the Giant Peach Summary
Danielle

In the story James And The Giant Peach, a boy named James and his bug friends were floating on a peach in the ocean. There were sharks attacking the peach. Then James thought of a plan. His plan was to use worm as bait. James would loop the silk around the seagull’s neck. Then he would tie it to the steam of the peach. He did it over and over again until the peach was in the air. So James and his friends successfully got away from the sharks.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Shamika

A young boy named James and his friends were all on a peach. In the ocean Were sharks all around the peach and were trying to eat them. James had to think fast to save every body and his self. The boy had to think of a plan fast or he would have been eaten. James and his friend had to think fast. Then he came up with a plan to save his friends his self. He had a great plan. The plan was to have the worm as the bait so the seagulls would come down and try to get the worm and would get ropes tied to there necks. Then the seagulls lifed the peach out of the water.

James and the Giant Peach Summary
Nicholas

James and some giant bugs are on a giant peach out in the middle of the ocean and while sharks are trying to eat them. Until James thought of an idea that would work. He would use a giant worm for bait. The sky was full of seagulls. Every time a seagull comes down James would put a string around a seagulls neck. Then he tied it to the stem of the peach. He did that until he got 502 seagulls. Then the peach was lifted out the water and away from the sharks.

James and The Giant Peach Summary
Kyle

In James and the Giant Peach there was a boy named James. James and some of his bug friends were stranded on a giant peach in the middle of an ocean. One day some sharks began to eat the peach. James had a plan to get away from the sharks. His plan was to catch seagulls and have them carry the peach away from the sharks. They caught a ton of seagulls and got away from the sharks.

James and The Giant Peach Summary
Tyler

James and his friends were floating in the ocean on a giant peach. His friends were Grasshopper, Centipede, Miss Spider, Silkworm, and Earthworm. When they were on the peach. James looked over the edge and saw that tons and tons of sharks were attacking the peach. They had to do something qiukly. So they thought and thought then James got a plan. They would rope a ton of seagulls and they pulled them to the heavens. James had saved them.

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